Guadalcanal

Guadalcanal

Thursday, December 19, 2013

Haiku

We are fighting in Afghanistan,
The people there don't know we're here,
Bullets are everywhere, damn Taliban.

2 comments:

  1. I like your use of the word, "damn." It makes the whole poem more intense and that much more real for the audience.

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  2. Great Haiku with a lot of meaning! I like your topic and learning about wars was one of my favorite topics in history. I look forward to reading more on your blog!

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